Hi all, this is my first attempt at fiction ever. I'm sure it's awful, first attempts at new things usually are.

Hopefully you can find something you like in it. I had a great deal of fun writing it.

It's a basic Litrpg/Game, God sends you to a new world to do their bidding plot. I Know I did too much telling and not enough showing. I'm working on that.

The underlying system is one haven't seen or done much. a full Point Buy system, like Gurps, Champions or the Hero system. After writing it a while, I see why folks don't do it.

The record keeping is tedious. And once you start doing math in subsequent chapters, you can't go back and add more action, just because you dread redoing all the math.

I've got about 80k words written in two "books" on the novel so far. I'm going to edit chapters and try to drop a couple a week till it's finished. Hopefully that will work for folks.

I need to punch up the amount of action. I'll be working on that as well.

Thanks,

Cal-P.S> The cover art is one of the two CIrce Paintings By Waterhouse.