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Ever want something so bad that you're willing to lose sleep, money even your life over? Probably not. But, how much would you sacrifice to have a shot at inheriting your father's company, that just came out with a new game called Legendary Age, the first VRMMORPG.

Shurki, the only son of the CEO of the company that developed Legendary Age, is desperately trying to prove himself in the eyes of his father. Will he be able to gain favor or will he fall, losing to his competitors?

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