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<p>Hi all, this is my first attempt at fiction ever. I'm sure it's awful, first attempts at new things usually are.</p> <p>Hopefully you can find something you like in it. I had a great deal of fun writing it.</p> <p>It's a basic Litrpg/Game, God sends you to a new world to do their bidding plot. I Know I did too much telling and not enough showing. I'm working on that.</p> <p>The underlying system is one haven't seen or done much. a full Point Buy system, like Gurps, Champions or the Hero system. After writing it a while, I see why folks don't do it.</p> <p>The record keeping is tedious. And once you start doing math in subsequent chapters, you can't go back and add more action, just because you dread redoing all the math.</p> <p>I've got about 80k words written in two "books" on the novel so far. I'm going to edit chapters and try to drop a couple a week , hopefully that will work for folks.</p> <p>I need to punch up the amount of action. I'll be working on that as well.</p> <p>Thanks,</p> <p>Cal-P.S> The cover art is one of the two CIrce Paintings By Waterhouse.P.P.S.> NOTE: Got the Covid, going to take a few days off before editing and posting the next chapter. , Sorry</p>
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