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<p>This fiction is going to undergo severe Editing and a Rewrite over next few months. Here is what it hopes to accomplish:</p> <p>1) Fix the glaring issues from Style in every chapter 1-31 (Dialogues, POV switches and Head-hopping too much)</p> <p>2) Add some new chapters in and justify the development between Sofia and Anita</p> <p>3) Remove the info dumps and make it more organic</p> <p>4) Finalize the genres that this fiction belongs to</p> <p>5) Create warning in the synopsis relating to the contents of the fiction.</p> <p>6) Overhaul and show what Mira's view on Alviona is (slowly)</p> <p>7) Introduce new characters</p> <p>8) Show chapters the way they were intended, as clues apparently were not visible at all!</p> <p>9) Make Alviona a bit more serious.</p> <p>10) Make me (Author) enjoy reading my own work more (yes! :))</p> <p>Hi. I have been gone for quite a long while. With heart surgery and such that has happened two months ago, I had not had a chance to log on RR due to being hospitalized. I had some other issues that the admins were kind enough to deal with on this fiction. It's good to see everything in one piece.</p> <p>The synopsis has been removed. Chapter 1 should be coming out sometimes before christmas. A lot has changed. I hope for the better. Instead of edits, I have re-read every single chapter and found it to be unsatisfying. A lot did not make sense and unless you have previously speculated what Alviona is, many things she does won't fall into pieces. Well then, time to address all of this.</p> <p>Ladies and gentlelmen, this fiction is undergoing a full scale re-write. While the characters and developments stay the same, it's being done differently. So much that the world should feel darker as it should have been.</p> <p>For those who have stuck around and know the story: Awesome. I worked hard on this, and hope that you will like my re-write.</p> <p>For thos that are new: Welcome. Give me some time, as I am super sluggish. I don't know much time is some time, but I gurantee chapter 1 will be up before Christmas.</p> <p>This said, again, thank you and know that I am back. And that this fiction will be completed. AT ANY COST. I will update synopsis after I post chapter 1.</p> <p>I might post Alviona (revised, as this current one is far too.... simplified, watered down, and dissapointing version of it) seperately. Those that want this, here. But I don't want to add chapter 40. It won't make sense without the backup and world-building of re-write. It will piss myself off.</p> <p>Now then, let's write hm?</p> <p>*This beautiful piece of art is provided by Charee from DeviantArt*</p> <p>https://www.deviantart.com/chalii</p>
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