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<p>The Fog: a harrowing phenomenon that for a thousand years has swept through the land, siphoning the life out of everything it touches. Light mages are the only people capable of keeping it away, but they are rare and their services expensive.Rall is just a kid when his father, the light mage Theodore Lightson, is mysteriously killed - their village left vulnerable to the Fog. Soon, he ends up alone, having to fend for himself in a world where a young light mage is a precious commodity. If he wants to unravel the mysteries of his family and the world, he will have to become powerful enough to survive.</p> <p>***</p> <p>Author Notes:</p> <p>+ This is a work in progress and just the start of what I plan to be a long web novel. Stick with me if you like stories where the MC grows up both in power and age, a mix of classic and original fantasy elements, strange and mysterious magic, and long-awaited payoffs.</p> <p>+ For now, I'm doing at least one update every other day. Soon I will go to two updates per week, and that will be my definitive schedule.</p> <p>+ I have read some gripping first chapters on this site, and, compared to those, I would not rate my Chapter 1 highly. I will probably rework it in the future once I feel I've become a better writer.</p> <p>+ I will always appreciate constructive feedback, so feel free to drop it in the comments or dm me about it. I have also enabled the 'Suggestion Helper' feature if you want to help me more directly.</p> <p>+ I am new to RR. Let me know if you notice there is something that I should do that I am not doing or vice versa.</p>
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