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<p>Hey if you're seeing this than welcome, I've just finished reediting and reformatting so I'll be redeploying each chapter in batches of between 5 and 3 depending on the content and at a set time for the next few days.</p> <p>The main change is that the chapters are shorter and more in line with RR expectations. No more 20k long fight scenes I guess... hrmph. Also the dialogue was pulled out of the paragraphs for readability along with a final final pass of the content. Feel free to reread or not but I'm still working on part 3 so hope this helps things along.</p> <p>Have fun.</p> <p>(also fair warning there's a pirate spoiler in the first chapter, you can skip it easy but its better to expect it than run face first into it)</p> <p>Its been ten years since Seth was given his powers, ten years since his town was driven mad by that very same power, and ten years since its source was shunted into his head. A species of energy beings, a people filled with regret for what their entrance onto this world caused. Regret for the deaths that town perpetuated, the devastation they brought, the blow they served to the once proud heroes of this world. Heroes Seth now hopes to join, hopes to heal and atone to for what transpired. But their wounds run deep, their ire sharp, and their acceptance thin. And to top it all off... Seth's power is run far deeper than he knows, and sees his world in a light all its own.</p> <p>This series is my first foray into authoring, with two parts out of at best four if the readership stands. But part three will still book end nicely otherwise. And I'm not stopping till then.</p> <p>It is action heavy with varied and ramping up fight scenes through out. (Book 1 is heavy / Book 2 a little lighter)</p> <p>It is bloody in places, mildly gory in others, and heavily gory in simulated places. Nothing truly horrifying, I think, but be warned.</p> <p>It has trauma. PTSD is a major part of the story, but I will never trust that I got it completely right, so your mileage may vary on how believable or impactful it is.</p> <p>Lastly it has language. Swearing ebbs and flows as the story progresses and attitudes harden or soften. Sometimes bleeding through into the narration... somehow.</p>
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