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<p>In the vast world of Taknoa, a single continent reminiscent of Asia in size and territory are divided among the strongest clans and formidable creatures that roam each region. Among them, four tribes stand out, each with their unique dream powers and conflicts that threaten to shatter the delicate balance that had been built.</p> <p>To make the competition fair between humans and beasts, God bestow powers to the humans when they complete ten years old, and here is were our journey begun.</p> <p>The story will follow the twin brothers, Lucien and Tomas, in their path to power, each in their own unique way, challenges and personalities. Prepare to immerse yourself in a captivating tale of tribal conflicts, unveiling the hidden secrets of the world, and the untamed forces that shape Taknoa.</p> <p>Some relevant comments:</p> <p>- I'm am not really a writer (actually I'm an engineer) and neither I have english as my native language, so I'll use my dear friend GPT to make the text a bit better. The story and the creativity are all mine, all I ever ask is for it to correct the gramma and rewrite the text as a professional writer without changing the content.</p> <p>- I'm doing this as a hobby and appreciate if you guys can give me some feedbacks about everything so the next chapters can be better written and developed</p> <p>- I started this project because I was just tired as a reader of the usual repetitive bullshit we find everywhere nowadays, so don't expect tedious levels grinding, game elements, excessive romance, cultivation (only as a joke) and the "starting as a mortal and end up manhandling gods" crap.</p> <p>- I'm actually quite confident in the plot (for real but that's only my taste) but my writing skills may get in the way, so come with an open heart.</p> <p>- Actually I have all the story already in my head, but only the first arch has the content of each chapter separated (50 chapters planned and 13 written at this date). I plan to at least complete this first part and, depending on your feedback, decide if I will keep writing or stop.</p> <p>- Hope u guys like, enjoy!!!</p>
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