This is my first story that i am writting i welcome all critics and anyone that can help me with reference material and maybe art work this story will have gamelit system it is warhammer 40k i do not own the rights to warhammer and if i ever publish will need their approval that said this story will be very slow progression and nbot many will enjoy it this is for the others that want a deeper alternate look at what warhammer can be for the common human and how they could rise above all those that enjoy lots of info dumps and cratiopns will get a kick out of it with all that said lets begin.