Hello all, this is my first shot and I wanted to get this out there in hopes of some feedback on style, pace, and, everything really. Let me know what you think, even if it's a heap of trash!

A journey of a seemingly prodigious son, of growth and struggle after a new mother and last seed of a dying kingdom narrowly escapes its' destruction.

The boy, given memories from other's past lives, struggles with what he only sees in his dreams, trying to match it up with his surroundings, and grows to find his own way in life.